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"In the end only love matters...
It is love that brought the universe into being
and it is love that will transform it...
Love is the Alchemist of the soul."
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Call the doctor
Call the nurse
This guy's goofy and gettin' worse
You forgot to render the snow the gets on top of his boot as he steps into it. It's just crisp white coming onto his boot, when it would have a little bit more form to it.
Also, what happened to his right arm? The whole arm of the coat stops where his elbow should be, and there's no indication that maybe he lost his arm (it would be stapled, or tied together in some way, or left loose). It doesn't look like it's bending into anything either.
Looks great, but those are two big problems that are bothering me. Everything else is fantastic, the colors in his face, the design of the trees, the composition of the whole piece is WONDERFUL. It's just those two things...
Please message me if you fix them - I'll be checking out the rest of your gallery.
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This is only here because all the cool kids have one.
....I wanna be a cool kid, too. :C
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This is only here because all the cool kids have one.
....I wanna be a cool kid, too. :C
and it tangents with the tree branch.
even if it's foreshortened, you need like a slight tapering of the sleeve. maybe darkening it will push it back, but i still think you should make it longer.
also feels like you'd see a bit more of the back sole of the shoe.
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